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Emperor Hull
Newborn
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New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4663 days ago
GaI Literary Competition Entry

>> Exiting Slip Space...
>> Entering Real Space...
>> Real Space return: successful
>> 0 Anomalies detected

>> Cutting power to engines...

>> Locating Coordinates...
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>> Coordinates located: Sector-11(Shimmer)//Sub-sector-244//System-2209130//

>> Launch Probes...
>> Probes away...
>> Awaiting response...
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>> Probe data received...
>> Processing c:\probe4explorer.4532.data
>> Planet located!

>> Beginning survey for potential colonization...

>> Activating engines...

>> Autopilot engaged...
>> Destination: X-323414537 Y-432890977
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>> Destination Reached!

>> Scanning Planet-#1327...
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>> Processing...
>> Atmosphere: 76% nitrogen, 22% oxygen, 2% other gases
>> Water levels: 73% planet's surface
>> Entropy Threat level: 0
>> Planet-#1327 status: Livable
>> Other notes: No civilizations, no sentient life forms
>> Colonization success potential: High

>> Renaming Planet-#1327...
>> Planet-#1327 new designation ''Neo_Chabri''

>> Holding orbit over Neo_Chabri...

>> Alerting crew...

>> Suggesting course of action: Colonize?
>> Awaiting Response...
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>> No response...

>> Beginning sleep mode to conserve power...


>> Restarting...

>> Offline for undetermined time...

>> Still awaiting response...

>> Crew unresponsive...
>> Emergency level: Red

>> Beginning automated colonization...

>> Waking cargo...
>> Unfreezing Cryo-bay...


Emperor Hull
Newborn
Joined 4810 days ago
Last seen 4198 days ago
Re. New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4663 days ago
So what do you guys think? :)
I'm going to continue it of course with the next part actually containing real people

I'm also writing a story about a space battle, but that is still a work in progress and so is my Empires timeline


Macatord
Newborn
Joined 5374 days ago
Last seen 2827 days ago
Re. New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4663 days ago
Its nice. I like the fact its a computer executing a program which makes it different. It looks very interesting and I cant wait to read more :D
Something witty and funny
extist
Newborn
Joined 5177 days ago
Last seen 3231 days ago
Re. New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4660 days ago
It reminds me of the story I gave up on a hundred or 2 days ago. Hand of haven I think it was called.
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