Newborn
Joined 4810 days ago
Last seen 4198 days ago
New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4663 days ago
GaI Literary Competition Entry
>> Exiting Slip Space...
>> Entering Real Space...
>> Real Space return: successful
>> 0 Anomalies detected
>> Cutting power to engines...
>> Locating Coordinates...
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>> Coordinates located: Sector-11(Shimmer)//Sub-sector-244//System-2209130//
>> Launch Probes...
>> Probes away...
>> Awaiting response...
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>> Probe data received...
>> Processing c:\probe4explorer.4532.data
>> Planet located!
>> Beginning survey for potential colonization...
>> Activating engines...
>> Autopilot engaged...
>> Destination: X-323414537 Y-432890977
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>> Destination Reached!
>> Scanning Planet-#1327...
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>> Processing...
>> Atmosphere: 76% nitrogen, 22% oxygen, 2% other gases
>> Water levels: 73% planet's surface
>> Entropy Threat level: 0
>> Planet-#1327 status: Livable
>> Other notes: No civilizations, no sentient life forms
>> Colonization success potential: High
>> Renaming Planet-#1327...
>> Planet-#1327 new designation ''Neo_Chabri''
>> Holding orbit over Neo_Chabri...
>> Alerting crew...
>> Suggesting course of action: Colonize?
>> Awaiting Response...
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>> No response...
>> Beginning sleep mode to conserve power...
>> Restarting...
>> Offline for undetermined time...
>> Still awaiting response...
>> Crew unresponsive...
>> Emergency level: Red
>> Beginning automated colonization...
>> Waking cargo...
>> Unfreezing Cryo-bay...
Newborn
Joined 4810 days ago
Last seen 4198 days ago
Re. New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4663 days ago
So what do you guys think? :)
I'm going to continue it of course with the next part actually containing real people
I'm also writing a story about a space battle, but that is still a work in progress and so is my Empires timeline
Newborn
Joined 5374 days ago
Last seen 2827 days ago
Re. New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4663 days ago
Its nice. I like the fact its a computer executing a program which makes it different. It looks very interesting and I cant wait to read more :D
Something witty and funny
Newborn
Joined 5177 days ago
Last seen 3231 days ago
Re. New Beginning (Part 1)
Posted 4660 days ago
It reminds me of the story I gave up on a hundred or 2 days ago. Hand of haven I think it was called.
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